luv spell

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By Ivana B WithUnow

ur luv

Oooo, ur luv is just like honey, baby


tickled delightful pleasure


as ur loving on my toes


so sticky and so sweet


immersed our bodies become


submerged in ur heavenly throws


luscious and delectable


u sweep me down below


cupped in spoon like fashion


pulsating devilish treats


please know I luv u forever, baby


to u my heart bestowed


melted in ur velvet kiss


hearts enveloped in poem

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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 2 years ago

My, my... beautiful start here.

ps. Do I know you?? :) welcome

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chrismarva 2 years ago

I feel what you feel, need what you need. Good job. Chris

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Ivana B WithUnow Hub Author 2 years ago

I vana thank u so for share my luv. x

ralwus 2 years ago

LOL, you seem to know me darlin'. I love you forever too along with them toes. hehe This is the great beginning of a new hubber I think.

Miss Take 2 years ago

nice one

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 2 years ago

do you know whom this is, Miss!?

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Ivana B WithUnow Hub Author 2 years ago

Ooo, vell hello darlin', thnks for share my luv x

too all xx

Miss Take 2 years ago

soooo suits you really really really does

Miss Take 2 years ago

this picture looks like the English Patient

poetlorraine 2 years ago

hi this is lovely

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Ivana B WithUnow Hub Author 2 years ago

I vana thank u so for share my luv. x

ralwus 2 years ago

You have a strange accent for one who may be in Bristol. LOL

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Ivana B WithUnow Hub Author 2 years ago

Bristol, vere is dis? x

ralwus 2 years ago

Haha, OK. I give in. No more guessing on my part you sweet thing you.

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Ivana B WithUnow Hub Author 2 years ago

vell ok then. x

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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 2 years ago

Ivana ~ congrats to hitting the page #1 of hot poems.. Great start. :) Look forward to more of you!

poetlorraine 2 years ago

i wonder if this love letter is for anyone particular, is it for you ralwus

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Jess Killmenow 2 years ago

Nice stuff, heat in freeform. :)

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Hmrjmr1 Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago

I join in the praise great start!

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Ivana B WithUnow Hub Author 2 years ago

I vava thnk u all fur ur share in my luv, so vonder vil xx

heat is so ver ver in free in luv, jess killmenow xx

I vana luv praise, hmrjmr1 x

ralwus 2 years ago

poetlorraine, I don't know, she spoke of 'your loving on my toes so sticky and so sweet', so it made me wonder too. LOL I don't know Ivana but wish I did now. I love you Ivana. Yes I do. You are off to a wonderful start.

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Ivana B WithUnow Hub Author 2 years ago

I vana luvs u too! xx

poetlorraine 2 years ago

ralwus she is such a caution. What a puzzle this is, what an accent. Wonder if she has any more poetry up her sleeve

poetlorraine 2 years ago

just came back for another read, i really like your work,

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blaise25 Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

so sweet and sexy poem Ivana, loved it ;p

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Ivana B WithUnow Hub Author 2 years ago

I vana thnk u all so vere vere fer share my luv! xx

vere nice to see u, blaise! luv, luv, luv xx

poetlorraine 2 years ago

another poem please, such a good start then just nothing.....

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Ivana B WithUnow Hub Author 2 years ago

vell, u now di spell of luv? xx

seasoning 2 years ago

i am also waiting for another poem please,

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