luv spell
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ur luv
Oooo, ur luv is just like honey, baby
tickled delightful pleasure
as ur loving on my toes
so sticky and so sweet
immersed our bodies become
submerged in ur heavenly throws
luscious and delectable
u sweep me down below
cupped in spoon like fashion
pulsating devilish treats
please know I luv u forever, baby
to u my heart bestowed
melted in ur velvet kiss
hearts enveloped in poem
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I feel what you feel, need what you need. Good job. Chris
LOL, you seem to know me darlin'. I love you forever too along with them toes. hehe This is the great beginning of a new hubber I think.
nice one
do you know whom this is, Miss!?
soooo suits you really really really does
this picture looks like the English Patient
hi this is lovely
You have a strange accent for one who may be in Bristol. LOL
Haha, OK. I give in. No more guessing on my part you sweet thing you.
Ivana ~ congrats to hitting the page #1 of hot poems.. Great start. :) Look forward to more of you!
i wonder if this love letter is for anyone particular, is it for you ralwus
Nice stuff, heat in freeform. :)
I join in the praise great start!
poetlorraine, I don't know, she spoke of 'your loving on my toes so sticky and so sweet', so it made me wonder too. LOL I don't know Ivana but wish I did now. I love you Ivana. Yes I do. You are off to a wonderful start.
ralwus she is such a caution. What a puzzle this is, what an accent. Wonder if she has any more poetry up her sleeve
just came back for another read, i really like your work,
so sweet and sexy poem Ivana, loved it ;p
another poem please, such a good start then just nothing.....
i am also waiting for another poem please,















I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 2 years ago
My, my... beautiful start here.
ps. Do I know you?? :) welcome